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Just put up a taster of Firelord's Heir, the second book in the series. It is largely unedited at present. Looking for comments on whether you would want to read on...

More of my stuff can be found in the Christmas Anthology and The Annals of Scribes.




I enjoy creating worlds populated by 'real' people facing real dilemmas. I also read a lot and draw, mostly in pen-and-ink. I love maps, true or imagined it does not matter. Favourite subjects are history, philosophy, psychology and religion. What you see is not all that you get!

For those who have wondered I have been married for over thirty years, have 3 kids and 4 grandkids, the old Springer, his missus and (allededly, 'cos I never see 'em) 2 cats. Now passed the big Five-oh and it's all true - overnight everything went south for the winter!




Covers by the maestro himself, Bradley Wind.

My backing policy: I look for the positives and offer a few personal thoughts. I do not knowingly snub people but, hey, I am human and I sometimes lose track! I do take swap reads, just let me know what you would like me to focus on. :)


To all you fantastic people who have put me on your shelves a huge thank you!

I took the HC review on board and both rewrote and trimmed the text. Hope you like the new version. :)

The Firelord's Crown is complete.

I am currently looking for representation and you can reach me at:

jim.darcy@hotmail.co.uk



favourite books

Adept series by Katherine Kurtz
Black Jewels series by Anne Bishop
Elric books by Michael Moorcock
Sterling E Lanier's Hiero books
Snow Queen and Cat Psion series by Joan D Vinge
Fushigi Yugi by Yuu Watase (manga)
Mma Ramotswe No 1 ladies detective series by Alexander McCall Smith (since we lived in Botswana)

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Firelord's Heir

Jim Darcy

Now a prince in exile, Falath faces an uncertain future in a land of strangers; some of them friends, others most definitely enemies.


Firelord's Heir continues the epic tale begun in The Firelord's Crown.



Falath and Airen negotiate the dangers of new realms as they journey to the mystical heart of Mandras. They have the missing piece of the Crown but others want it too and will stop at nothing to acquire it. Falath must learn to control and develop his gifts of maisterie but still mourns the loss of his kinsman, Rollo.



Meanwhile, a strange, fair-haired man is discovered by rebel scouts and subsequently healed by Jessal, their charismatic leader. This Mirin has no memory of who or what he is but Jessal realises that he could hold the key to their salvation.


Answers lie with Guild Master Tamilin and both parties travel to the Healers' Isle in search of them but Mandras is a very dangerous place indeed. In his own land Falath is a prince, here he is just a valuable commodity...


 

The Firelord's Crown

Jim Darcy

Would you do everything within your power to save your people? Even consort with sorcerers or risk damning your soul? That's Falath's choice.


After a devastating misuse of magic the world of Riom shifts on its axis, initiating another Ice Age. Two thousand years pass before Tamilin, Master Healer and Seer, uncovers this truth. He learns that the only chance of saving his world from unrelenting winter is to reforge the Firelord’s Crown, the powerful artefact that was instrumental in the original magical battle.


But the circlet was divided up amongst six companions who took ship and headed for safety when their homeland was destroyed. During the voyage one of the ships vanished but the segment her captain guarded will be needed to complete the Crown. Tamilin believes that it may lie far in the uncharted north and dispatches an expedition in search of it.

Airen, lone survivor of the venture, reaches the land called Dinith, where he hopes to find the lost piece. Dinith however, is a land in turmoil. Magic is forbidden, the glories of the past forgotten. Airen and his quest are not welcome but could Falath, the King's heir, be the ally that he desperately craves? Perhaps, but Falath, descendant of the Lost Ship, has his own secrets...





 

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andrea lightfoot wrote 19 hours ago

Hi Jim Thanks for backing the Fire Pendant. Would you like to inve....

ChristineRees wrote 21 hours ago

Thank you Jim. I really appreciate you taking a look at it despite th....

Katrina Anne Jack wrote 21 hours ago

Okey doke mate. I'll send you some questions tomorrow. Off to bed now....

Katrina Anne Jack wrote 22 hours ago

Hi Jim, how're you doing? Wondered if you'd like to be interviewed ab....

Philthy wrote 1 day ago

Cool. Yeah, it was a small thing. Just a suggestion.

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I wrote 1 day ago

Interesting blend of myth and modern. The tyypeface does not do it justice here on Autho but in a picture book would be fine. view book

I wrote 9 days ago

Chilling tale excellently executed. I got goosebumps from The Death of Grass - same feeling now. view book

I wrote 9 days ago

This made for an entertaining coffee break read. Iris quickly grabs the reader's sympathy and Preebot is suitably hissable. Writing is sharp and punchy, description is enough to ground rather than swamp the reader. nb slight text upload problem at the bottom of chapter 1 :) view book

I wrote 15 days ago

Sing-song story-telling that is crying out for gorgeous illustrations :) view book

I wrote 16 days ago

Not your average fairy tale! :) This raw, harrowing but certainly grips the reader by the throat. My only comment would be that your use of capital letters gets a bit distracting, especially the use of aargh. You may want to experiment with other ways of showing this. Just IMO. view book

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