The beginning was a little hard to follow, but that was the only thing that I wasn't able to follow. All in all it was well written and unique. Well done. view book

The beginning was a little hard to follow, but that was the only thing that I wasn't able to follow. All in all it was well written and unique. Well done. view book

The opening line was perfect. This continues throughout the story but adds to it as the details begin to roll in. There are very little if any words wasted. You are a fine writer my friend. view book

There may be a few typos and such, but I have to say that this is the sort of story that I've been waiting for. For a while now Ive been looking for a superman-ish story where the 'superman' to be more man than super. Very well done, backed.. view book

I like I really do. There is a sense of heaviness, that I attribute to the way you did the back story. But underneath that there is a uniqueness that continues to draw me in. Well done and good luck. view book