Great writing - good opening chapter and strong characterisation. A pleasure to back. view book

So sorry for the delay in returning the read and such a pleasure to find this. Your descriptions in the first chapter took me back to my childhood and your characterisations are excellent. I am not sure that the pitch does this justice. I loved your writing style and found my interest was held even ... view book

I'm not surprised to find such interesting and descriptive writing but on top of that it was a pleasure to find such an imaginative topic and approach. A couple of small comments. I loved the phrase 'squirmed and wormed its way down the hallway' but thought the sentence collapsed at the end with... view book

I know I have read this before and so I will just briefly comment again. Your ability to reflect Indian culture and language, together with the sheer vibrancy of your writing is outstanding. I'll back this again just in case it didn't register last time. view book

Excellent writing. It was a pleasure to read this. You took us into action straight away, providing information subtly without an information dump. A great end to the first and third chapters. Even in these early stages of your book I can sense the richness of the plot. My one comment would be a... view book