Setting a novel in an exotic location at a pivotal point in history is a smart move. I've only read the first two chapters, but already I sense an emerging love story in a dangerous place and time with hints at an interesting back story. I like the nice touches - not only the descriptions of the reg... view book

Backed this. Very strong synopsis and a compelling opening. One observation - watch the repeated words in same sentence / paragraph. E.g. in the prologue - woke / woken, window, sound. Best of luck with your writing Shaun The Six Acts view book

Backed. Particularly enjoyed the Bismarck section! Shaun The Six Acts view book

The tags say it all! A parred back, tough, clipped style and short sentences indicate a mean, ruthless narrative - fit perhaps for such an unforgiving setting. Based on the first two chapters I've backed this. Very enjoyable. Shaun The Six Acts view book

Hi Fran, I enjoyed chapter 1, which started at a pleasingly upbeat pace and gave us enough of Trent's character to hook the reader. A couple of observations. 'I'll give you something to cry about' - the phrase didn't ring true. Maybe a angry father talking, but perhaps not a human trafficker? Also,... view book