Hello John, Well, I love a good ghost story! Ghasts and gheists, fascinating... I liked the interchange between the family members, the scolding and the teasing, very natural and realistic. My main criticism is your use of 'commanded' ''retorted' 'asked delightedly' 'mumbled' 'said urgently' 'sna... view book

Hello Jen, I noticed you had a nasty red arrow so I bumped you up my priority list. A very unusual opening paragraph, which interested me straightaway. 'trill of butterflies' - nicely different metaphor! Good way of feeding in background via dialogue with a stranger, doesn't make the story stumbl... view book

Hello Kennesaw, Punchy, gritty, yet packed with emotion, this memoir is hard-hittingly compulsive. It is so outside any world that I am familiar with that it is mesmerising. Fabulous hook at the end of chapter one - he's committed two murders already but you state he is about to become a monster - ... view book

Hello Jan, This is great... very easy to read, flows along nicely. The theme is a familiar one that people can either identify with, or know somebody who has been through it. The main characters are very real, and their dialogue is natural. I sympathised with Maggie and Cindy's strong character sho... view book

Thoroughly enjoyed this - two adventurous ladies! Well done. Shelved. Nicky view book