Hi Nathan. I see you've been visted by La Greenstein. The good news is that he talks the same kind of shit whatever book he's critting. You may want to take a look at some of his work to see if this is a man whose advice on writing is worth listening to -> http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/24... view book

Before you even consider Monkeyfeet's advice, perhaps you should take a look at a sample of his own writing and ask yourself if this is a person who know anything at all about good story-telling: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/241633-sea-quest view book

Before you even consider Monkeyfeet's advice, perhaps you should take a look at a sample of his own writing and ask yourself if this is a person who know anything at all about good story-telling: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/241633-sea-quest view book

Having read your first chapter, I feel I have to say that the person who calls himself 'MonkeyFeet' is talking bollocks and you should ignore him. He obviously has trouble comprehending the simplest of things - such as the fact that the story begins at your grandmother's house. What a tosser! view book