My thoughts on part two As a starting point I will give my initial response to the narrative itself. I read the twelve chapters in a sitting, not out of obligation, but through curiosity and compulsion. The opening tableau’s impact was both tantalising and mysterious which was enhanced by the us... view book

Fabulous writing. Hugely impressed with what I've read of this. view book

Not entirely convinced about this architecturally but it's very fine writing with lots of insight and delicious humour. view book

Superb writing, Alistair. Lyrical, intelligent, thought provoking with the sound of the sea somehow ever present. view book

I love this and have read all that's posted. The third person POV with Zinnia and Felix and the 1st person with her father? works well. Your writing is smooth and polished and the premise is intriguing. Please let me know if you post more. view book