Greetings Joffery, From reading your pitch and tags, I first thought this may have some science fiction elements. Is this what you were going for? I just assume this because I saw hypnosis and in your pitch you mention he has a certain "gift." Or are you focusing on more real world elements. ... view book

Hello Bojan, I loved how you created a complex plot and judging by your ranking many others do too. I do like the history elements within your story. I like to read stories with an original, engaging plot and yours does not fail to deliver. Your martial arts concept right from the beginning pu... view book

Greetings Raven, I sure liked the beginning prophecy of your book well written and suspenseful. It gives us the subtle foreshadowing of what the character has to become or is. Your short pitch really brought my interest to this. How will she save her people if she has to destroy the world? It... view book

Hi there Ian, I liked the topic entwined with your book. I have heard the topics of read heads and what they were subject to. I suppose it could be because red hair genetically is one of the rarest hair colors. So it is of little wonder why people of read hair would be considered physically di... view book

Greetings Kevin, Just getting around for your return read. The first issue I saw in your prologue is you are missing a comma after but. Honestly speaking, I really did not notice this at first because I was pulled into your story. I gave off a history book appeal and I personally like that. I... view book