Hi Fletcher, I left you a long comment this morning, which authonomy lost (not the first time). I think I know why you're not yet published. You need to get closer to your characters. Avoid generic sentences such as "She had been dating for a few weeks". Instead, show us what's unique about your ... view book

Hello Fletcher, You asked that I take a look at your stories. I think I can help you with your skill as in "the only skill I have developped is the art of not getting published." Bear with me. Here is my opinion (personal, non authoritative, flawed, you name it). You have done an amazing work ... view book

Other than because you seem to from that country, Romania is not a household name for the readers that I know, i.e. US readers. You might need some introduction as to why readers should care that the defector is from Romania, and not "some" Eastern European country. Likewise for Italy. You need to ... view book

Other than because you seem to from that country, Romania is not a household name for the readers that I know, i.e. US readers. You might need some introduction as to why readers should care that the defector is from Romania, and not "some" Eastern European country. Likewise for Italy. You need to ... view book

The key in this type of book, i.e. a book that aims at flying as high as Tom Clancy's work, is to establish immediately a one-on-one relationship between the reader and a very strong main character. That character will be the voice of the book, and when you will swamp the reader with technical detai... view book