hi ticka, i finally read your book! yey! i loved it. it was really nice and extremely well written. the wealth of detail in it is amazing! it is a great piece of literary fiction. In fact i think that is my only concern with it. it is slow paced with a wealth of description which i think alot of lit... view book

hello ticka, i have just read all of the chapters you have put up and you write really well with vivid descriptions with a wealth of detail. it's really brilliant writing, though i think your story progresses too slowly. even at the end of all the chapters i've read i feel like i'm still at the beg... view book

hi sam, just finished ch9. it's great i can't wait to find out what happens next! i know your busy but i hope you post more soon. i'm eagerly anticipating it! view book

hi josh, i really enjoyed your book. i have to remove it from my shelf for the time being but if you find yourself sturggling as you reach the editors desk just drop me a line and i will put your book back on my shelf. all the best with everything. amelia view book

hi JJ, sorry to say i have to take you off my shelf for now, but i think you have written a brilliant and enjoyable book. if you ever get stuck as you reach the editiors desk just give me a shout and i will happily put you back on my shelf. all the best, i think your book deserves it! view book