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Bob Jones

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Bob lives with, Bea, his loving and supportive wife of thirty-eight years in Ontario, Canada. Father and Grandfather, Bob has led an unconventional life including owning and operating a sailing charter in the Caribbean for four years. Bob is a successful Realtor as well as writing novels, short stories and poems.

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The Old Man And The Sea
The Stand
Caribbean
Mandingo

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TakeAway

by: Bob Jones

A paramedic is coerced into delivering human organs for an illegal transplant syndicate called TAKEAWAY. His wife JAN MARSH, an ex-commando, must tear TakeAway apart.


A paramedic is trapped into delivering stolen body parts for an underground organ donor syndicate called TakeAway. Jan Marsh, the paramedic’s wife uses her background in special operations with the Canadian Forces in an attempt to get him out and return their lives to normal. This fast paced thriller with a fresh premise makes TakeAway hard to put down.

TakeAway is complete and in final rewrite. All comments are welcome and appreciated.

 

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ndayerr wrote 197 days ago

(jessica_2vndaye@yahoo.com) My name is jessica i saw your profile t....

KirkH wrote 239 days ago

Hi Bob, I hope you can get a chance to read parts of my college cape....

Eponymous Rox wrote 257 days ago

Hullo again, Bob--just a quick update: My book's on the Ed's Desk thi....

Eponymous Rox wrote 293 days ago

Hullo there. I'm still a reader on Authonomy scouting for new authors....

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I wrote 442 days ago

Hi John, Thank you. Honestly, I'm stymied by the rating system. My rank had gotten close to the 1000 mark then started falling for no apparent reason. Your comment is uplifting. Thanks again. view book

I wrote 494 days ago

Great introduction of characters in clean tight prose. Beliveable dialouge interdispersed in a balanced flow that makes reading your work truly enjoyable. Great writing! Bob Jones / TakeAway view book

I wrote 504 days ago

Hi Andy, I've star ranked and added you book to my watchlist. I read most of chapter one as my time is limited, but I liked it a lot. You hasve the making of a great story. One thing you might be cautious of is using the ly and ing words. You do like them, and they weaken good writing. Your paragra... view book

I wrote 508 days ago

Well written and compelling. I've enjoyed reading the first and part of the second chapter. I added Purple Eyes to my watchlist and will read more later. You are a talented writer J.P. Something to consider is the use of large bold fonts to expound certain parts of the story. This is not needed a... view book

I wrote 525 days ago

Hi Jere, Excellent read. Well written prose that pulls the reader through the story. I found the writing clean and tight, although you may want to watch the use of words like 'just'. Stick with it, and I'm confident True Nature will find a publisher. Good work! Bob Jones TakeAway view book

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