Great start. I love the martial arts, my favourites being Bruce Lee and Chuck Norris, and love the movie 'Blood sport' Oh anyway it drew me in nicely. This was a very delightful and exciting chapter that had all the action and suspense one would wish for in a book. I was held captive from the very ... view book

This is awespome and I think Emmy-lou is a very cute little character. Me thinks Bruno will be a companion that they will all have to rely on but we will have to wait and see. I just love this. But, I must agree with JenniferThorne. Chapter four is a repeat as is 5. Perhaps you have made an error a... view book

Well, I must say that you managed with your words to almost bring a tear to my eye. I could very well invisage just what was happening here as Ryan stood there explaining to the young soldier who he was and why he was there. The dialogue is brilliant and I am definately going to be reading this come... view book

I like the idea of their being a mishievious sugar glider in the mix. That makes for an interesting read. Just one thing here....In this paragraph, I think you have used the word...'open' too many times in a very short passage. Perhaps you can replace one with another word that gives the same affect... view book

This is a very endearing first chapter that introduces us to the two ophaned Kangaroos and the family who look after them. Very well written with great dialogue that you have down pat. I was smiling the whole way. Can't think of a thing to say to improve on this so I am off to the next chapter. view book