Hi Francesco Love the opening, the crudeness of Salvatore, and the blend of Italian into the dialogue works very well. I like Mafia tales as well as agangster films etc, so this is right up my street. Good luck with it! Stavro. view book

Easily the best thing I've read on here so far! Especially as horror is my thing, this is perfect for me. Dark, gruesome, but most of all, funny. Reminds me of a cross between a Brian Keene novel and an old xbox game called Stubbs. You keep it simple, and I can tell you have a helluva lot of f... view book

Hi Janice. I like the opening, the heat, the sexiness. The way you introsude Kathrine as a werewolf ealry is well done and doesn't mak the story sound a bit silly, as it could if not done properly. The language you use is perfect to reflect Katherine's vulpine like horniness, but is that true ab... view book

Slow and delibearte, you lull the reader in and then blow them away with one subtle, chilling sentence of dialogue. Marcus is scary, and from the first chapter I assume he grows into an even scarier adult. The opening paragraph and one line sentences that follow are perfect, sums it all up excellent... view book

Hi Miles Brutal, bloody opening, posing lots of questions for the reader, this is good. However, I feel the first part is a little unnecessary as it's a bit slow (and would a hitman/assassin have his objective written on a device? Surely it would be all arranged by mouth so as not to leave any... view book