My son would be delighted with this, I think. The rhymes are wonderful. Backed! view book

I like your dialogue...the was you use it to both set the tone and tell the tale. You manage to be literate and still keep your characters young. Everything about this book will appeal to YA readers, and your topic is certainly timely. Good luck with this! M. view book

The story is great, but for me it is more of a travelogue. Your descriptions of life in Africa are fascinating, and after reading about the preparation of meat in Chapter 29, I am tempted to try it for myself. Perhaps because you are telling a true story there is much conviction in your words. Re... view book

Ohhh, I like this! Your character is wonderful! I could easily get caught up in her. And you pack so much into your sentences. They are easy to read and give lots of information all at once. Love the introduction of the French would-be lover in chapter 3...ooo-la-la! This is a great read! I h... view book

Wow! Reading chapter 5 reminds me why I'm no longer married, and how glad I am of it! I am repulsed as Shawn leans in towards "Pussy", and manage to feel compassion at the same time. And later, as Hayley is charmed by her daugher's swim coach, I wonder what will happen next. Good stuff, Alan! B... view book