Call me a moron dork, but I liked the first chapter. Don't quite know if the kiddies will understand some of the words though. view book

"now on the whole, micheal was somewhat an average child..." It says a lot about a person when he or she can write a profound and completely descriptive sentence in the most simplest of ways. That is what intellects know to be their secret. No big flashy unimpressive attempts using complicated ph... view book

I fucking hate vampire stories but this will be the first book i am gonna put on my shelf. Read the first few sentences and hoping to see that potential in the next few hundred sentences. A few weak and disjointed sentences, but so far, so good. view book

Let me comment on the first paragraph. Before i continue, let me say that you do have potential but you try to hard. The second sentence of the first paragraph makes no sense. You speak of a vacant land that isn't vacant. You should leave out the word vacant, and continue with the rest of the sen... view book

No offence, but this book actually sucks. It's like an infant wrote it. My advice is to throw it away and stick to your day job. view book