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Shampoooop

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I'm a tough critic with high standards. I give input critically and hope anyone who reads my novella will do the same. There's no way to get better by kissing ass. Improvements can only be made real detailed critiques.

favourite books

Anything by: Agatha Christie, Tom Wolfe, Patricia Highsmith, Shel Silverstein and Chuck Palahniuk.

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my books

Sex After Marriage

Shampoooop

A couple works to keep their marriage together through infidelity as a troubled husband pushes his wife further than she ever thought she’d go.


After starting a family in northern New Jersey, a once happy couple struggles with infidelity and trust. Evan Harris tries to resist temptations of loveless sex for the sake of his completely devoted wife. After confessing to an affair, Evan's wife Ashley vows to work to keep the marriage together no matter how much her repressed rage may cause trauma.

(In progress. Needs editing. Feedback requested.)

 

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ndaye wrote 121 days ago

(rafica_4ndaye@yahoo.com) My name is rafica i saw your profile toda....

Daniel Delacy wrote 431 days ago

After one year on the site and over 700 reviews, I have accepted many....

Daniel Delacy wrote 692 days ago

Care to swap reads? Apocalypse Then

TomW wrote 927 days ago

Hello Shampoooop (did I get the number of "o's" right?), Intereste....

JANVIER wrote 938 days ago

hello Shampo..... I am w/listing your book for comment shortly. I....

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I wrote 1039 days ago

LOVE IT! Well-rounded characters, witty, good insider POV.... It's very interesting. Can't wait for more chapters! view book

I wrote 1052 days ago

I read "Chub Bette," and am so frustrated right now. I have so many complaints, I don't know where to start! Self-masturbation? Isn't that a little redundant? Probably not as redundant as saying "...and masturbated" every other paragraph. No development or significance to such act. No other word ... view book

I wrote 1053 days ago

I feel like this is an inside joke and I'm out of the loop on it. view book

I wrote 1053 days ago

Clear, well-written book. Please note that I have not read it entirely. Some of your chapters seem incomplete. I find it hard to believe you have no further comments on "gender roles" and that you do not acknowledge why orthodox have a reputation for being a sexist community and explain that in g... view book

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