Great stuff! I read your opening chapter and premise and thought it was very well paced and interesting. There are plenty of hooks in your opening, such as the Major's obvious dislike of the victims (presumably he will emerge as the leader of the Survivors) and the question of whether the cure wi... view book

Hi again! Unexpectedly, I found some time today to read chapter one. Here are my thoughts:- The Afridi tribe are more famous as a border tribe, and have clans on both side of the Khyber Pass. The area they inhabit is that which is considered a nogo area by Pakistani authorities within the FATA... view book

Hi! I've just read your prologue and thought I'd let you know I found it exceedingly well written: well paced, full of interesting hooks (like Li's order from Wu to kill/maim Wang and the mention of Operation Kashgar in the concluding sentence) The premise of your novel sounds most interesting... view book

I love the way you show your future, your new, shocking reality, through the eyes of the survivors (or victims). This is really good stuff. On the downside, and it's only a small downside, I think that having a wank in the opening paragraph will tend to put off a lot of people who won't therefore... view book

Your premise sounds fantastic. I had to back this! :D view book