Hi--this book has a lot going for it--action, intrigue, and exotic locations! The plot seems very current now with all the earthquakes that have happened recently and the political climate. Good job! Debbie "Afterlife" view book

Hi, Your long pitch is somewhat confusing--maybe you should say the mother was murdered? Your writing, however, is excellent. The first chapter was really gripping and scary! I read a few more chapters and I thought the story was really interesting. Good luck with it! Debbie "Afterlife" view book

Hi! I'm always interested in reading books with these themes since my book has a similar one. You did a great job of it so far. I only had time to read the first two chapters, but would love to read more. You write well and the first chapter is really suspenseful. I love guys with Scottish accents, ... view book

Hi! Wow! Your writing style is very lyrical and haunting, and each word seems to be chosen carefully for maximum effect. I'm very impressed! This will be published someday-- Debbie "Afterlife" view book

Hi! This is a very interesting and current premise, coming on the heels of all the Armageddon--type movies. I could see this as a movie already. I would take out the first two paragraphs and jump right into the action. That's just my personal preference. Otherwise, this is a well written and thought... view book