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I'm a teacher and researcher based in Edinburgh, Scotland.

I want to write commercial fiction with characters who can be reused in subsequent work. I believe that unless fiction is accessible it is pointless. My pet hate is post modernism. I have the greatest respect for mainstream Hollywood and TV writers who manage to make mass market work that is more than just commercial; Billy Wilder, Betty Comden, Adolph Green, David Angel, Peter Casey, David Lee, David Mamet.


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Ivanhoe, Treasure Island, Jekyll and Hyde, Holmes, Rebus, Sotland Street, No1 Ladies', Trainspotting.

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St James Place

MacKenzie Spence

Margaret MacGregor discovers the decomposed corpse of a 1920s archaeologist in the garden outhouse of her new home.


Excerpt

'Forty years as a pathologist had left Dr. Allen comfortably wealthy, and in all that time he had never been tempted by the possessions of the dead. But this watch. This watch was different.

Cleaned and dried, it showed no signs of having lain at the bottom of a pool on the wrist of a decomposing corpse; the 18 carat gold case and strap, immaculate. Not a drop of moisture had penetrated. Dismantling it would tell him when the watch had stopped, and give him a probable date and time of death, but that would destroy this beautiful object. But there was another possibility. Tentatively he held the winding mechanism between thumb and forefinger and gently turned the ratchet.

At the second turn, and for the first time in eighty years, the watch began to tick.'


 

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I wrote 983 days ago

Well done Pierre, a well deserved addition to the Ed's desk. If anything on here deserves to be published, this does. Graham view book

I wrote 986 days ago

Hi Pierre, Just to say I've re-shelved Fig Tree and good luck. This deserves to be published. Graham view book

I wrote 987 days ago

Freddie, You have got this scarily close to reality. In the back of the dissertation there is a copy of the charter of The Muslim Brotherhood which details their methodology. The pan European organisation to which you refer is the European Muslim Network http://www.euro-muslims.eu/ that ope... view book

I wrote 988 days ago

Yep, this is good. It is a difficult subject; getting the balance right between creating a stereotype, and creating a fast paced plot is one of the most difficult aspects of what we do but you have done it well. I'd perhaps like to see a bit more background and motivation, but I assume that gets fil... view book

I wrote 994 days ago

Hi Matt, Sometimes there is little to say. This is professional. It read like an edited, completed book with none of the rough edges one would find in my or other work here. I wish I could add more, but when reading it I kept forgetting I was meant to be reviewing and simply read it. That prob... view book

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