This is very good. There are a lot of images and observations that stick in my head, like the one about mania meaning more activity, more waking hours, and more opportunity for fate to catch you up. And the description of the cat as an offended waiter and the one of the narrator's brain as a trapp... view book

I've read the first two chapters and really liked them. Poor Azura. I like your descriptions of wandering through the night. You make it sound very beautiful. And I really liked the part where Azura refuses to understand French. I think it's a very natural reaction and works well in the story t... view book

I love your characters' names and all the different styles of writing at the beginning. I haven't gotten a chance to read more than the prologue yet, but what I did read I really enjoyed. view book

I very much enjoyed the first chapter, especially the part about Raffo collecting all the works of great thinkers in their original languages, none of which he can actually read. I liked it from the start, and I was pretty sure I would be backing it once I got to the line about the machete, but the... view book

I haven't had time to read as much of this as I would like to yet, but from halfway though the first chapter, I can tell I like it. Lincoln is an interesting choice of POV character. And you do a good job of setting up an undefined sense of menace with both Lincoln and the woman's anxiety and with... view book