Hi Chris, the start of the first chapter was a good hook and got my interest which is always good but then it seemed to lose momentum as you go into the description of the guy on the subway. I would have liked to see how the vision of his own death would have impacted on him in regard to emotions, ... view book

Hi Jak. I really got drawn into this and read the first 4 chapters straightaway. It's an intriguing story and whilst Sim acts and behaves badly you give him something in his character which doesn't alienate him from the reader. Very good writing. I am book shelving this and will come back to read ... view book

Hi Lexi I like the smooth way you write which makes it easy for the reader to get involved. Although not a crime fiction reader I have enjoyed what I have read so far. Will come back to it. Ellen view book

Hi Chris - really great read. Your writing flows well and the end of the chapter draws the reader on to the next one. I've read all six and I would have read more given the chance. I'm intrigued to where this is going. I've put you on my bookshelf. Ellen view book

Hi Tim - I've finished reading and want to congratulate you on a piece well done. Your description of places is not excessive and sufficient information is given to allow the readers to use their own imagination. Characters are well rounded with bits of their history given out throughout the sto... view book