Thanks for the read swap, mate. I've read the first few chapters and will offer this in the way of constructive criticism - shorten your paragraphs. Too long. It is unappealing to the eye. This is in no way a criticism of what you have written. The words, the story, are well balanced. Shorte... view book

Rachel, Top stuff. I was hesistant at first, because being tough and very much manly, I cringe when I see the 'romance' tag on a story. I wonder how many other great stories I've bypassed because of that. I suppose romance shouldn't be shied away from, all things considered. Heh - getting off top... view book

Tom, Excellent stuff here. I can't pick fault. This is a great story, a great premise. I like that we get straight into the story (the future) and think your target audience, and probably beyond, would love this. I read the first two chapters, plan to read a few more. Grandpa saying this: ‘... view book

Michael, Thank you for recommending this (even if you do sound like amazon, heh!). The subject matter is definitely one that has to be approached with some due care (and plenty of research, it seems, on Quebec), as there can be a swath of controversy attached. Only I don't think controversy is th... view book

Hey there. Cool story so far, mate. I've read the first few chapters and I'll back this based on the quality of the writing and the temptations in the plotting. I can see there's plenty more to go, so I'll make a point to get back here. Few critiques: Watch your adverbs. They're unnecessary an... view book