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I live in Cambridgeshire and I read almost anything that takes my fancy, though mainly crime and thrillers.

I'm writing a thriller at the moment and I've uploaded the opening chapters to see if people think it's any good.

Thanks to David Gibson (Foretuneight) for his line by line review and edit of the first 8 chapters

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THE PRODIGAL

Keith Jagger

I've always been afraid of dying. You should never trust a man who tells you he's not.


The fear of dying had often kept Lucas Wyman awake at night; sometimes it was all that kept him alive. But now it's the fear of living that keeps him from waking.

Somewhere, on the outside of his current nightmare, the phone rings. When he doesn't pick up, the firm sends a couple of guys to get him.

"They" want to see him...They are the faceless men who float on top of the stinking cesspit of covert operations...They want him to crawl through the sludge at the bottom...They know he won't refuse their offer...They know he has nothing left to lose.

The War on Terror has a new enemy. They're religious fanatics with billions of dollars at their disposal, they were trained to kill by the US military and the British army, they're fighting for Jesus and they make Al Quaeda look like a bunch of boy scouts.

They call themselves The Soldiers of Revelation. They were responsible for creating Wyman’s nightmare, and now he's about to become theirs.

NOTE: This book is neither pro or anti religion . It's about men who manipulate and murder in God's name for their own ends.

 

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I wrote 784 days ago

Just though I'd return your comment - Word for Word Here's a SPAM I plagiarized... oops! Um... "prepared" earlier: Dear Reader, I am not a #1 common potato. However, it all began on the 24th of December, 1905. Frank was still in pantyhose, Catherine still in a coma, Crystal Palace still burn... view book

I wrote 784 days ago

Being Authonomy's # ? commentator. (who cares anyway?) Spend some time on your pitches I cannot overemphasize how you need to master this basic sales technique to grab the casual reader. That's how you climb in ranking to gather more exposure and comments to better your novel. I can't actually be... view book

I wrote 786 days ago

I've just re-read Ch 1. It think it flows more easily than before, and it is pacier and more intense. BACKED and I look forward to reading more. view book

I wrote 788 days ago

I like the pitch, I like the way you write, I like that it had me LOL. But why all the coloured text ? If this gets published it'll be B+W so I can't see the point. Having said that the text/background combination in Ch 1 is very easy on the eye and better for reading on screen. Keith Jagger ... view book

I wrote 791 days ago

David. I'm one of those stuffy Brits who tend to blather on, so I'll keep my comments short. It's great. Thanks for giving me a good laugh and some very useful advice. rollingstone view book

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