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Keep those comments coming I just got a printer & I like to print out my story and go over it, no small feat with ink cost. So if you don't see a change immediatly I'm NOT ignoring your opinion ok? Thanx! I took everyone's advise from when I first uploaded this into consideration and I revised my book "Butterflies". I added chapter breaks and deleted nonconsequential paragraphs and hopefully made it better overall. I thank everyone who backs this, it has become a part of me. A lot of me is in Butterflies. I have had so much go on in my life, that I broke it up into pieces and distributed them into my characters. They are, literally, part of me. I became fascinated with the 60's in my early teens and feel like I was there and reincarnated here. Let me know what you think!

Hello all, come on in and have a good read. Butterflies is a sweet coming of age story in a turbulant time of the 60's. I've been working on this for about a decade picking it up and putting it down again. Finally I felt like I owed it to my characters to finish. My godmother read it and gave me some positive feedback and upped my self confidence. She's AWESOME! If I could get published I think I'd cry! lol Talk about a dream come true!

The untitled one is just a crazy whirlwind ride where Erin's losing her mind...slowly but surely. I'm having a hard time with this and really just wanted to make sure it kept people's attn.

Have fun! Back my books!! And thank you in advance if you do ;)

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V.C. Andrews, Christopher Moore, True Crime, Diane Hoh when I was a teenager! Still read them for fun. If you want to know who my farourites are on here keep watch on my shelf! ;), and my friends'.

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Butterflies

Hilary Entley

It's like V.C. Andrews meets Forrest Gump. Language! History! With a twist of girl power! Finding their family.


To be nobody but yourself in a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you everybody else means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting.
e. e. cummings

Rainy, Sunny, Silver and Betty are best friends. It's the 60's, one of the most turbulent times, parents don't understand, women are finding their voices, kids are rebelling and Marci is a pain in the ass!

Follow these girls as they find their way and find their voices. An eye opening trip to Washington D.C. and a fantasic trip across the country. Some will find love, some will be lost in the time and they will all stick together and be the family they never had! Filled with some of my own life and some is inspired by classic V.C. Andrews writing, hopefully it's just as compelling and entertaining!

 

Untitled as of yet

Hilary Entley

Can't find a date? Neither can Erin. How do you deal? Erin? She goes just a little mad.


What do you do when things never seem to go right? You ever wonder what is going on inside your date's mind? How do you deal when a date doesn't go quite as you'd like it to? What happens when you just can't take it anymore? Erin has been in the dating scene for just a little too long, she can't take being alone anymore so she does the only thing she hasn't tried yet...she makes up the perfect guy. But what happens when the lines between her imagination and the real world get just a little too blurry? Now Erin is stuck in a whirlwind raomance...except he isn't real. Can she give up the best thing that ever happened to her for something real? Is she ready to trust another actual human being? Can she step out of her comfort zone and have a real life now? Or is she stuck in her own mind.

Not worried about getting this one published right now, it's not finished. Butterflies, I am. This is just hilarious and I was hopeing to get some feedback, THANK YOU! If you could go up to Butterflies and back that one it'd be greatly appreciated.

 

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I wrote 191 days ago

Chapter 4: "A what?" ...drooping eye.... Then you have Sepp telling him what it is without changing paragraphs. That's all I've got so far, I'll read more later. :) view book

I wrote 191 days ago

The first 2 paragraphs in chapter 3 are awesome! Maybe the second one can prelude the whole book itself.... Ok still reading. view book

I wrote 226 days ago

Well even with "The setting of Boston, (and indeed an Animal Protection Agency), are concepts that could alienate any non-US audience", I think that you should try and get any story that'd spread the word of animal abuse out there. It's not in the news NEARLY enough. Good luck! :) view book

I wrote 479 days ago

Thank you sir! Returned :) view book

I wrote 513 days ago

Ya listen to these really good suggestions, watch your punctuation. " 'to the fiery pit of hell,' screamed Captain Zara". commas are your friend lol. I went to chapter 4 and saw in the second paragraph, "where the suns light" should be "the sun's light" singular possession. I'm sure I have a ton o t... view book

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