Avatar for Purpleelephant

Purpleelephant

not yet ranked

first registered 05.03.09

last online 343 days ago

report abuse
about me

A mother of one from Cambridge, UK, who dreams of being able to give up the library job so she can write during normal, daylight hours.

A strong coffee for me please. Black, no sugar.

About Maggie's End,

This started as a NaNoWriMo novel way back in 2005. It has been through so many revisions and rewrites in the three and a half years since then that if I was to read the orginal, I probably wouldn't recognise it myself!

I'm looking for honest, helpful, constructive comments on Maggie's End oh - and I always return reads.

I'm planning to upload a chapter a week as I go through the next round of revisions. Feel free to nudge me or beat me up if I don't keep my promise.

favourite books

Alias Grace, Margaret Atwood
Closing the Book, Stevie Davies
Jane Eyre, Charlotte Bronte
Cranford, Elizabeth Gaskell
Paradise, A.L. Kennedy
The Accidental, Ali Smith
Germinal, Emile Zola
Orlando, Virginia Woolf
Testament of Youth, Vera Brittain

my websites

    

HarperCollins is not responsible for the content of external internet sites.

Self-publish with CreateSpace

my books

Maggie's End

Amanda Dixie

A paranoid mother and her daughter hiding in an abandoned caravan are followed by a strange, ten year old girl who knows too much.


Since Robin turned thirteen, a strange atmosphere has been seeping over London. Pam has left Mum and disappeared back to Greenham Common, and now school has closed for a week. When Robin suggests a holiday, she thinks of somewhere warm where Mum can relax and recover from her heartbreak and perhaps make some new friends.


She has no idea that they’ll end up hiding in a dilapidated caravan by the sea, only able to explore during the cold November nights. Then she meets Maggie, a young girl who almost leads her to her death playing on the rocks by the sea. Why does Maggie keep following Robin? And why is she so obsessed with that recent suicide out on the cliffs?


As Mum’s condition deteriorates, Robin and Maggie are thrown together on a wave of discovery, involving a chicken shed, a pile of newspapers and a man who paints pebbles on the seafront. Robin is swept out of her depth, as she learns about the brooding landscape; the dark secret of Maggie’s past and the true threat of her own mother’s illness. Her discovery will change the way she sees the world around her forever.

 

my friends

Christopher Roy Denton
Christopher Roy Denton
last online 6 mins ago
Joanna Stephen-Ward
Joanna Stephen-Ward
last online 18 hours ago
John Booth
John Booth
last online 4 days ago
marybussard
marybussard
last online 35 days ago
rjladypunk
rjladypunk
last online 47 days ago
Sandrine
Sandrine
last online 57 days ago

leave me a message

click here to leave a message

latest

ndaye wrote 230 days ago

(rafica_4ndaye@yahoo.com) My name is rafica i saw your profile toda....

Dwayne Kavanagh wrote 312 days ago

Hi Amanda, Help ‘A Killer’s Kind’ stay on the desk.... In Grants P....

Name failed moderation wrote 480 days ago

annaweah55@yahoo.co.uk Hello, My name is anna i saw your profile ....

Daniel Delacy wrote 537 days ago

After one year on the site and over 700 reviews, I have accepted many....

Daniel Delacy wrote 652 days ago

Care to swap reads? :o)

view all

my comments

latest

I wrote 1120 days ago

Well well, a foot tickler eh?!! I can't work out if that's very funny or very creepy. Both I think. Some super funny lines in here. I like the comparison beteen soccer and baseball mums! I also like that you've given the foot ticker a smell, this is interesting. The line about her astma getting wo... view book

I wrote 1121 days ago

Hi Sue, Can I just say my 7 year old nephew has SMA which is similar to CP and I remember going through all those tests very well. Some very tearful moments, 'Maybe tomorrow' made me well up and the bit about her stomach going up and her heart going down is beautifully written but still in the voic... view book

I wrote 1121 days ago

Hi Katherine, I love the fairy-tale-like dreamy atmosphere to this. The couple are warm and interesting, their dialogue is real. I'd be happy reading this to my 7 year old but just as happy reading it to myself for my own pleasure. It does have a kind of oral sound to it. Like those tales that have... view book

I wrote 1122 days ago

Hi Keef, Why is this book not published? I mean have you not sent it off yet or something? If I was an agent/publisher I'd snap this up, but wait, I'm not, so you'll have to make do with my praises! I love the beginning, the way Theo is really worked up and no one seems that bothered. I love th... view book

I wrote 1124 days ago

Hi Pierre, I've been reading 'Fig Tree' over the weekend and I'm absloutely pulled in. I love the voice you write in. I love the characters and the story is so poignant and tender. It might be just me but just before the picnic, I didn't like being told that something terrible was going to happen.... view book

view all