Nancy, I've read your whole book. If your still considering getting an editor I don't think you'll need one just yet. Your writing seems good enough. I might shorten some of the dialogue in the first chapter. When Redmond is trying to bring along Gabriel and she won't let him leave the love becomes... view book

Hello Eleanor Stoneham, I read the first three chapters of your book. I believe in God, Heaven and Hell. I like the fact that your seeing bigger picture and how to make the world a better place but I do not believe the answer is in organized religion. There's so much at stake like money, corporatio... view book

Hello Brittanee, Thanks for the comments. Like you said, there is more to my story than I typed in the first 50 pages. Sorry for taking so long to respond. Your chapters are long but I read the first three. I thought it was well written and you have a good way with words. You might want to try the ... view book

Hello Karen, I read all 4 chapters of your book. Reading it actually made me feel better. I've decided to back the book and at least til the end of this month. Like your book said I try to live a well and productive life. I think your lucky to have a spirit guide standing with you and knowing all... view book

Hello Rheagan, I read the first five chapters of your book. In the first chapter I was confused about who the Peacekeeper was. Not until you introduced Tessa was I able to understand and it kind of added into more confusion in chapter two with Fujiwara. I like this character Tessa and how she is fl... view book