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MosesSiregarIII

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Thanks for stopping by! I hope you'll get a chance to check out my work.

I created a novella out of 15 chapters from this novel (about 20% of the full novel), and it's currently available on Amazon for $0.89 or for free at Smashwords.

If you back my novel because you feel it deserves that, and/or if you comment on my work, chances are good that I will seriously consider your work in return--but please be patient. Btw, If you want a thoughtful comment from me, please leave me a decent one first. I probably won't comment back if your comment has little substance to it. My comments are quite honest, but I also do my best to be positive and helpful.

My novel is an epic fantasy that pays homage to The Iliad and deals with an ongoing war between two very different cultures. I've done my best to create a host of rich characters wrapped up in an intense storyline. The book also deals with some spiritual and metaphysical themes.

I am looking forward to meeting lots of good people and great writers here. If you'd like to be friends on Facebook, Twitter, or GoodReads you can find the links through my blog below. My email is mosesmerlin *at* hotmail.com Thanks again for stopping by.

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I'm open to almost any fiction with well-developed characters, a solid plot, and a thoughtful theme. I read more fantasy than anything else, but I like dabbling in other genres as well.

If you get the chance, thanks very much for taking a look at my novel.

Keeping in mind that it is an epic fantasy, please let me know what you think of the work and I'll do my very best to reciprocate. Thanks again very much and have fun out there!

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DEUS EX KARMA

Moses Siregar III

Her father-king wants war. Her messianic brother wants peace. The black god wants his due. She suffers all the consequences.


The Kingdom of Rezzia’s royal daughter and son command the powers of their patron gods, but still suffer torture from the blackest of the divinities. Lucia and Caio encounter tragedy, and struggle to understand why, as they face their father-king’s karma and strive to end his war.

Caio is the Haissem, a religious savior born every tenth generation, and he would rather heal the entire world than kill a single man. His father, desperate for victory after fighting for nine long years, turns over his role as spiritual-military leader and forces the duty on his son.

However, until Lucia leads Caio into the macabre underworld to find bitter answers from the black god who invaded her bed and dreams when she was ten, the gods will continue to ignore their chosen people and throw death in their faces.

On the other side of the conflict, Rao, a gifted young sage and the Prince of Pawelon, joins the war to defend his people from Rezzia's fanatical Haissem. Rao's spiritual principles collide with his army's general as he petitions for a decisive duel between himself and Rezzia's savior.

 

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I wrote 643 days ago

Gerry, I love your first chapter. I really like the warm voice. It has an endearing quality that's very easy to read, and that's a gift. I also liked a lot of your language choices, specific words (flowers, street names, etc.). Two things I noticed. One was that the end of the first section felt,... view book

I wrote 712 days ago

Hi Janice, it's sexy and it's great. You must know it's good already, so let me just get right to kicking your butt a little. You can do much, much better than your current first paragraph. Don't sabotage yourself. You've written it like a really hot woman who introduces herself by stuttering in ... view book

I wrote 717 days ago

Hello Tim, I think this is one of the most creative first chapters I've read here. I really respect your vision and your craftsmanship with this work. The first section (the one the 'author buddy' wrote) was pretty hard for me to get into a groove with because the internal dialogue kept interrupt... view book

I wrote 718 days ago

Forgive me in advance for going on at length here. I'm happy to admit that you're one of two writers I've read here that I feel some jealousy towards. I read your first two chapters, and there's a lot to like here. The dialogue is generally phenomenal, and Naomi is one of the most memorable characte... view book

I wrote 718 days ago

Hi Kev, I love the passion in your writing and the clear sense I have as a reader that the story is going somewhere and that the author is going to fill it with intense drama. I love that, actually. Now for some critical stuff. The large opening paragraph of the prologue feels disorganized to ... view book

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