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I am not interested in charts or getting published, I have that end covered myself. I am here for the readings, ideas and critiques to help improve my book and help others do the same. Thats the whole point of this site right?

I am not here for kind words; I am not here for moral support, and I do not need a crutch. I have friends and family for all that. So, do not waste my time with empty complements. Tell me something I can use and I promise to return the favor.

Read mine with insightful comments, and corrections and I will return the favor and if climbing the charts is your thing, I will back your book.



If you enjoy Head Games, consider buying my first book Instant Messenger, availabel through your local bookstore’s order desk, Amazon.com, Borders.com, barnes and noble.com and more.

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Serial killer, blackmailer, and drug Lord—such is the resume of the man known by some as Ghost. He is stalking his perfect victim through her instant messages. To him, she is “The One” and her death will quench his urge to kill.

Meanwhile, Faye Patterson, a former NYPD Homicide Detective, secretly reopens the case of her missing fiancé. A string of murders leads Faye on the trail of the sadistic killer, who is becoming more ruthless. The Ghost kidnaps Faye’s daughter, thrusting Faye into the path of his murderous rampage. She needs to stop him before her daughter becomes his next victim. But can she?

A masterpiece that delves in the dark realms of aberrant human behavior, Instant Messenger steps up to the league of brilliant psychological thrillers.

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HEAD GAMES

Benoit Akoa

An ex Rwandan child soldier and a sadistic deviant decide to play deadly Head Games with the cops.


An ex Rwandan child soldier and a sadistic deviant decide to play Head Games with Portlands' finest Homicide Detective, Hoelbeck.

In the spirit of the Hilltop Stranglers many years ago, this is a serial murder story of impaled heads alongside different highways.

It all begins when Abdi, an ex child soldier from Rwanda stops on an isolated stretch of highway 22 to relieve himself. He inspects the brush and sees a man doing an unthinkable deed, an act reminiscent of his child soldier days, an act so foul, yet it presents an outlet for his latent issues. The man finishes his gruesome deed and looks up, then smiles. . . .It felt just like Abdi's first time . . . A vortex of memories spiraled through his mind . . . He felt normal, the same way he did in Rwandan war zones . . .
This is the beginning of their macabre relationship.

 

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I wrote 585 days ago

This reminds of of the sixth sense. Yet the plot is original in itself view book

I wrote 590 days ago

Thank you for the comments. Except that they are not fucking a skull but a recently decapitated head in its mouth, (the body is still slumped over next to them which he attacks under the watchful eye of the old man). In addition, if you read further, the impaled heads have been soaked in bleach thus... view book

I wrote 592 days ago

By putting a spin on the Bard I’d say you are a very brave man. I like your spin its good stuff. view book

I wrote 592 days ago

Actually, the behavior (Necrophilia) is not extreme and more common among serial killers than most people realize. Bundy, Kemper, Dahmer, Ed Gein Gacy, Bianchi & Buono, Trenton Chase just to name a few, I could name at least 30 serial killers who practiced necrophilia and sexual acts with human bo... view book

I wrote 597 days ago

I am not a good critique for memoires, I am a fiction writer, however, memoires and fiction all do the same basic thing. That said, I noticed throughout (And I read through chapt 16, you use all caps for emphasis, unless these are typos. From my knowledge, Italics and esclamation markls are best use... view book

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