You big tease.This is an interesting story line that you have brought me up short with. I am getting involved but want more now. Any chance soon? Ths only small comment (God, we all start like that) is that to balance the writing you try and drip feed the information you want to get across rather t... view book

Judging by the debate from previous contributors it looks like you need emotional support but I doubt that. Nobody who sits down and writes a book (which it is whether short sighted editors take it up or not) is going to fall over at the first sound of criticism. It does knock us back for a few days... view book

Reading anything written in the vernacular has great potential pitfalls, largely because readers are generally lazy and take the easy options (not meant to sound so derogatory) as a consequence they rebuke the difficult option. But you have managed to keep that interest and encourage readership desp... view book

Hi Anthony The opening chapter was like being hit with a club hammer. It was almost a case of how much more tense can it get. It's true what someone else said the chapters are ver short. In book form that would hold up the reader because we all take apause at chapters end and there is not sufficien... view book

What's up here? No comments for an age and the book is going south. It is a good story line and the characters are beginning to emerge from the text. So far so good. I know when I put my book up first time the criticisms knocked me sideways, but you have to get them in perspective and there is mer... view book