Hey! Thanks for the title help! :) So, the title made me think it was going to be historical - don't ask me why. So it was a wonder when I started reading the pitch that it wasn't...and then I began reading and it was an amazing surprise. I think you have managed to capture life in this estate... view book

Hey! The prologue is brilliant, it hooks you right in. The first sentence especially, direct address works really well here. I find the fact you don't properly introduce your character until chapter 2, because it entices the reader and keeps them wanting to find out more. I found myself wanting... view book

Hey David! Here for our read swap! So I liked the pitches and thought it'd be a good read. But honestly? I wasn't expecting THIS. Your writing is extraordinary, something to be inspired, your descriptions are vivid. The storyline itself is intriguing, and leaves me wanting more. It's exciting... view book

Hi Andrew, From the pitch of this book, I was pulled in. Chapter one - now, this is a brilliant periodically written piece, I must admit. Your writing style is so authentic. The ONE thing I would say, though, and this is merely a personal thing here, is some of sentences in the first chapter,... view book

Hey! I read the pitches, and I really wanted to read further! Writing - I think your writing is really, really amazing! Your word choices, descriptions....they are really inspired! Your characters are relatable and they feel real: you can imagine everything they do and say, and they've come ... view book