I stumbled across this due to a thread in the forum. The writing is really fluid and clean. I liked what I read, but did find, after five chapters, the flipping from person to person and hopping through time distracted me. This isn't my normal read, but the story seems original. Based on writing, I ... view book

This is a delight to read. Not my ideal genre, but still it was easy to slip into this. You have some very engaging and enjoyable characters. No wonder this is ranked so high! I've read a couple of books on here, not many as I am new, but this is one of the better written ones. I thought the idea of... view book

Really enjoyed the chapters I read of Cicada. You are a prolific writer and if the other two novels you have posted are as enjoyable as this then I am sure they are hits! You really write well. Much better than I. Em. view book

I think the beginning reads like a list of things that have been done. Rather dry. But I am pleased I read on. I thought the later chapters (3 & 4) were much more engaging. This isn't a genre I usually read, actually, I usually avoid science fiction. I do think your writing is clean. I didn't note a... view book

I've been seeking out YA and Children's novels and found this little book. I did note a couple of editorial and grammatical issues and I must admit that at first the setting and names pushed me away. I hate to think this is my own narrowmindedness, but I fear it is and it simply took me time to adju... view book