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george kohlman

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Self taught at libraries in NJ, NY, and Ohio at universities : Princeton, CW Post, Ohio State. I always remember Aristotle saying: 'Drama and comedy are intricately linked, with comedy being the harder one to use to tell of the drama.'

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The Great Gatsby; Ethan Frome; Deliverance; The Prince and the Pauper.

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Two ex-college football players, now age 45, are disenchanted with the way their lives turned out. One becomes encouraged early, the other at the end.


A character study of the two single middle age men ensues as the more honest one, Russ the protagonist, accepts poverty. He's convinced that he's as secure in the spiritual world as anyone can be, and is not sanctimonious toward the antagonist Bud about it, neither self-serving, nor effacing. Bud is not condescending toward Russ. They discover inadequacies of character which they then surmount. The story moves using spiritual dependency and spiritual despondency as a means of examining the values of American life.
Russ and Bud help police in their home town of N.Y.C., diffuse drug dealing, while in conflict with standard working class problems of their own - in one night of an extraordinary peak to those conflicts. Afterward, they take what little they own to California in Bud’s van. Along the way they meet two dwarf size Klan members whom they then, Russ enthusiastically, Bud very reluctantly, take as far as Columbus Ohio, to help get them treated medically at its university hospital on a charitable basis. Russ teaches growing in grace through unfair trials of suffering is for learning. In a display of gratitude, the dwarfs help them capture human trafficking agents syndicated to drug rings.

 

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patio wrote 21 hours ago

Hope you better now

Tarzan For Real wrote 1 day ago

Glad to help. That seems like a gripping drama with lots of interpers....

Karamak wrote 1 day ago

Creepy I was just seeing that you were on-line and then you sent your....

Karamak wrote 9 days ago

Right George i have changed it back and put the lady of leisure quote....

Karamak wrote 9 days ago

Ta, Karen x (I kept think why am i listening to this stranger when I ....

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I wrote 14 hours ago

Pretty good - and pretty good material in Chapter 1. It leaves me with something to be desired though and I don't know what yet. Perhaps another writer, looking at it from another angle, could jumble it up to bring out the best essence of the thing so far. George view book

I wrote 10 days ago

After chapter 7, it's good you didn't sprinkle in biblical passages or opinions like I did, it would snag the momentum of this story's journey. Disabled people are treated varied depending on country and time of history. When Japan was bombed at end of World War 2, those uninjured were disconsolate... view book

I wrote 10 days ago

Karen, looking over Chapter 1 again, I like the way you have it for 10 or more paragraphs better. Might get the woman of leisure in there about then if possible. George view book

I wrote 10 days ago

Ahh, very refreshingly easy to follow compared to the Arc of Humanity - at least for me. Up to chap. 4, and like to continue tomorrow. I have Lazarus in my book too, somwhere at the middle and near the end. I used him differently however, unless the end of your book coincides with mine. I feel he wa... view book

I wrote 10 days ago

Hi, chapter 1 is fine. A bit confusing at - 'Lucia, sit up.' Ok, if she's eight, but then the next thing I know she aked by father if she's prepared to work for him tomorrow and nothing written or surmised translates that age transition. My watchlist and rate it four stars for now. Best, George view book

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