Hey! Thanks for pointing me toward your book! Positives first! I love the story. It's a good yarn. I just finished chapter 8. I love the interweaving of past and present, the notion of gold stolen, betrayals, innocence. (remember how heavy gold is though! She would have been hard pressed to pick... view book

haha what crazy weirdness! I was a bit taken aback by the style at first, but once I got my head on that way, it made sense. It's as though Rick is a bit defensive, trying to tell a rather horrible life story but not wanting your pity, not taking charity, does that make sense? He comes across as ... view book

Hi. I've added your book to my watchlist and hope to get to it very soon, but I have a quick question - what does Mezzanota mean? I know the word mezza, the word notá, and the word mezzanotte, but not the one you use. Is it Italian? Don't get me wrong, I'm not a fluent italian speaker, it is per... view book

I have read the first two chapters so far, and you are on my watchlist. I am going to comment a little - for what its worth! please be assured I know that what I am offering is simply an opinion, not a fact, and I have no qualifications to criticise! I liked chapter 2 far more than chapter 1.... view book

I am really enjoying this. Lampooning the bank and the church at the same time! What could be better? Nice clear start (I admit I skipped the beginning word list as advised). You give us the hero, the villain, the underdog and the society in one easy mouthful. The dialogue is vivid, the character... view book