Hi Dai: I know you don't want comments, but I like this very much and think it would be well worth your effort to adapt your punctuation to what's conventionally in use. The style is crisp, natural. It moves well and feels realistic, all of which appeals to me. Seriously. Fix it up and sell i... view book

Hi Deloris: I quite like this for the imagination behind it and love when the snake whispers into her ear at the end of chapter one. Although I did wonder why her rival is blonde, living in a tribal African village. The text needs a thorough proofing for grammar and could be made more succinct.... view book

Steve: [x-posted from the forum] I read your chapters before (and, in fact, your book is still on my shelf) but for some reason I didn't comment. I think I was in the middle of an edit frenzy, so please forgive the omission. The writing here is breathtaking. The grace, the style, the caden... view book

BJ: This is a similar storyline to some I've read before. A psychic in one form or another accused of complicity in murder is the stuff of a great mystery thriller, but you've made the plot your own with distinctive events and characters that feel alive and vibrant. I found myself drawn in from... view book

Raymond: Already I'm impressed with the way you blend the workings of the mind and events outside the self. Ruth's doting on Rosie is seemingly innocent, yet so focused and intense that it may not be a matter of paranoia feeding his thoughts and reflections. His mind is complicating the scene, ... view book