When I first dived into this I sort skimmed along the first few paragraphs, but there was something there that pulled me in and made me read word for word. Let me just say that I enjoyed the male characters more than anyone else, even though your MC was brillant. There was something so mystifying re... view book

I usually look at the tags of a story before proceeding, as they tell me what I can expect from a story. I saw 'goats', laughed a little, and jumped on into the story. The opening was good, just way too many hyphens for me to digest. I suggest scaling down on them a little, as some can be replaced w... view book

School -- something I look back fondly on and raise my middle finger to. Within your story I came to see the school itself as a secondary character, along with the characters that continue along your plot along. A few things I notices: Ch. 1 "Some of them wore bags under their eyes..." - Wore ... view book

This is a beautiful piece you have created, and I am glad I was allowed the chance to read it. Upon reading, I was drawn into the story, and each chapter revealed something new to me that deepened the story. Finding out that the MC was adopted into the village, my interest was piqued, and further re... view book

Who doesn't love a new twist on Alice in Wonderland? It seems like a daunting task, but you really have captured Wonderland and twisted it to your own fancy, creating something that is just as quirky and interesting as the original. The one thing I feel the need to comment on is the pace of the stor... view book