Thank you so much for reading it. This is of course a very rough draft. I like to post the story first to see it the idea of the plot is interesting enough to persue. And yes as any new author point of view is something most of us need to work on. "Your story has a flow that is very compelling. Y... view book

Ms. Black, Very nicely done. Your story moves at comfortable pace, while pulling the reader into the story line. Having read your first work I know more than a hint of intrigue is on its way. I love the twists and turns you manage to surprise your readers with. view book

I will be remembering...'We not using our nice voice so I'll hang up now.'Loved it. Finish it and send it out into the world to enjoy. view book

I read most of it. I had to skip a few chapters due to time but skipped very few. As Already mentioned tighten up and I think you need to cut some of the detail in parts. I also felt after Joe reconciles his life after Sara 's death a good ending point. I felt after that part, the story became " ... view book

Read the whole thing. As others have said. your style is easy. The twists and turn keep the readed interested, well done. odeb view book