Hi Steve. You've already had more than enough comments to know that your work is excellent so I won't add too much other than to say good luck. Hope this gets published. Muhammad (The Lost Routes) view book

Hey Simon. This is one of the best stories I've read on authonomy in terms of originality and knowing your target audience. Penelope's voice was spot-on. I could imagine her running back and forth to her room for the letters. In other words you had me engrossed. Hope this gets published. It's on my ... view book

Hi Jeff. This is great. You've put together two of my favourite genres to write a fantastic story. Your writing is pacy and entertaining and from what I've read this promises to be an epic adventure. I'd like to read on when I can. For now you've got my backing. I hope you make the editors desk this... view book

You write with good pace and easily hook the reader. There's no doubt about your writing ability. Now to the subject matter: this is obviously controversial. Your MC Azeem is likeable but even for a so-called moderate Muslim, he lives in a lot of sin. I'm not saying that he needs to be as good as a ... view book

Hi Dale. You've got an intriguing story going. I don't usually read more than a chapter but I found that I couldn't stop reading because you create suspense very well. The only suggestion I have is that you go through your work again and proofread it for typos. The words flow nicely except in the be... view book