Even though I was thrown into chapter 23, I found that I could find my way in the story and sympathize with the main character. The description of your observations are good. I also enjoyed the glimpses into cultures other than mine. Backed. view book

I read the first two chapters. I have to admit that the prologue almost stopped me from reading. It was choppy and simplistic. Could it be revised as a mock interview or into the same style as the rest of your work? Overall, your writing is engaging with some good observations. Backed. view book

This is one of the few reads where I haven't had to "work" to keep myself reading. The style flows easily, and the characters and their relationships are interesting and propel the plot forward. I can see best-selling potential. Backed. view book

First, let me say that this is really well written. And I will back it. And hopefully it will make it to the desk next month. Next, this criticism has to do with my tastes alone. If I saw this in the bookstore, I would not have read beyond the prologue and I would not have bought it. Yes, this ... view book

After reading the first chapter, I thought, Wow! This character's voice is amazing. It's consistent and colloquial and creative. Then I thought, Sure, anyone can write a good first chapter. Can he maintain it? So I skipped ahead to chapter ten. Yep. You did it. Excellent work. Backed. view book