Your writing is lovely, humorous and well-written in a British style, if I'm not mistaken. view book

You have a beautiful writing style, very intense, and the first chapter I read is touchingly sad. view book

First chapter impressions: colorful visuals, both painful and sexy (LOL, too hot in here?). You write in such a way that I can viscerally feel Roger's agony in remembering. view book

For first chapter: very vivid, exciting writing style. I saw some punctuation issues, but nothing especially major. Maybe a few too many exclamation points for comfort, but you might want that effect. The characterization of the kind Preacher and the confused Stranger was quite strong and well-done.... view book

Oh, goodness. I read the first chapter, but the experience was already terribly saddening. I apologize for not being able to read further, but for those who have stronger constitutions, I recommend this work as a painfully realistic and well-written autobiography. view book