Your dialogue is entertaining. I enjoyed reading through it. The length of your sentences is good as well. It keeps your reader alert while reading and continuously creating the scene in their minds. It's a good piece of work. Excellent! BACKED, CSAndersen view book

This is a truly unique work of art and is completely captivating. Your writing style flows effortlessly to your reader. This plot is intriguing and your first chapter leaves your reader wanting more. Thank you for the splendid entertainment! BACKED, CSAndersen view book

This is a brillant story! I was enthralled in the beginning with Carolyn and her older brother, John's relationship. It's quite real and natural. You've done an excellent job of sculpting it. Then I was captivated by the way you weave the story. It definitely pulled on my heartstrings. Our society c... view book

Interesting! I've made it about half-way through your story. I found the opening chapter a nice, normal setting of a doctor's visit and then was thrust right into the action half-way through. This is a brillant way to weave the storyline! I continued to read on to Chapter 2, where I'm beginning to s... view book

Incredible! It's breathtaking to read. Half-way through the first chapter it felt as if I were reading a song. It was like music to my eyes! This is truly a UNIQUE and beautiful story. I wouldn't be able to say it enough, but you've done such a brillant job. From your prose-like writing style to the... view book