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Damien Dax

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New to authonomy as of the date it says I registered. I'm here to get some great suggestions for my second novel, Song of Sorrows: Melody of Darkness and to partake in all of this excitement I see going on.

I don't spam but sometimes I forget that I sent you the same message numerous times. So don't get mad at me, just read my book and tell me how I can make it better.

I can be reached at damien.dax@live.com or at home phone number (3695) 2153-3376245. If you need to find out any more information about me my social is 54365-23432-0543428 and I bank with Amsouth.

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Song of Sorrows: Melody of Dar....

Damien Dax & Edward Thomason

When explorers uncover an otherworldly artifact, chaos grips the world of Triaas and evil forces conspire to use it to destroy all of existence.


When explorers uncover an otherworldly artifact, chaos grips the world of Triaas. Through her obsession to posses the object, Elzabet, the only one who can control the mysterious power, is blind to the its destructive nature. The artifact’s true purpose emerges as the key to unlocking an ancient deity and Elzabet finds herself in a race against evil forces determined to use the artifact to destroy all of existence. All the while, she may be acting as a puppet to a much older and much more dangerous god.

She is helped along her journey across her world and through time by Sameila, a rival from another nation resolute to destroy Elzabet's nation. Can the two put aside their political differences to save both Triaas and Earth?

MOD is but book one of a tetralogy and is complete at 100,000 words. A shift from the genre norm, a fantasy setting with heavy science fiction, philosophy, and social themes; no cliched magic, elves, ogres, or dwarves; and a fun adventure for all.

 

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I wish you'd come back. You owe me!

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I wrote 439 days ago

First of all, I wanted to thank you for your honest critique of Song of Sorrows. Since your words mirror my own concerns, I know you actually did some reading instead of the normal, “Great Job, loved it,” type. What you’ve cited as problems for you (confusion, continuity) and you’re right, I wanted ... view book

I wrote 443 days ago

Whenn Emman Johnson at seventeen meets sventeen year old Jaosn Miller they feel like they have fallen in love, but things will change for them. You have three typos in a single sentence. This won't make people want to read your book. view book

I wrote 444 days ago

I just read chapter one and it was enough to make me want to read some more, but before I do, I wanted to tell you I think you should put a few more edits into the last three paragraphs. There is a lot of boring telling going on here. If you don't tell us that Charles doesn't remember anything, b... view book

I wrote 448 days ago

Dear Ms Gulick, I also write about God and would appreciate a backing and feedback if you can give either. God-fearing folk and all. view book

I wrote 448 days ago

Thanks for the read and suggestions. I'll make sure I get to looking at those. I'll ahve to examine the imagery in the first chapter and see if I can change things up a bit. view book

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