It took me a couple chapters to get into the story, but now I'm loving it. Very well written account of early lesbian experiences. I like the characters and they interact well. Can't wait to read the rest. view book

The translation is pretty good for a non-native English speaker, but could use some polishing. I like the story-line so far and am waiting for Jamie's secret to be revealed. Please continue with the English version, I'd like to read more. view book

Wow, I'm fascinated while only through the first half of chapter one. As someone who has written a true life story about coming out as married, I completely identify with the feeling of living two lives. Your sense of the surreal is tantalizing, this is one I will read from end to end. view book

Thanks to everyone who has mentioned that the hook leads them to expect more surprise or shock. Based on that feedback I will try restructuring by giving you a more juicy first chapter that relates directly to coming out. Originally I wanted that to be a surprise, but the backstory has more of a "... view book

Love your tone, sounds like the way my friends and I talk. I laughed outloud several times in the first few chapters, and I always like a book that does that. view book