Avatar for Vsuvi

Vsuvi

rank: 6240

Last week's position: 6251

first registered 27.09.10

last online 116 days ago

report abuse
about me

Love reading and writing (isn't that original?) and randomness. My latest writing project, a fantasy web serial following the travels of a mute siren, an eccentric bard, a gentlemanly vagrant and an exceptionally penetrating young woman can be found at

http://outcastsofalyvion.wordpress.com/


Leir itched his left leg with his right boot, staring at his audience with a blank smile. The moment he strummed his mandolin, however, his shaking fingers calmed, his shoulders relaxed, and he promptly forgot he was facing an audience at all. To him, the audience was simply an excuse to play his music.
"Ladies and gentlemen," Leir said, "it has been long since we have last met, and tonight I have a few words of utmost importance to impart." He paused. There was a brief, expectant silence.
Leir opened his mouth, then closed it. "I've forgotten them," he said. "Ah, well. It happens. It was something about absolutely forbidding you to rate Vsuvi's books without reading them and critiquing honestly, and perhaps a mention of gratitude, but to be honest I found it utterly dull, so I will spare you the rest. And anyway, I don't think Vsuvi intends to visit this inn often, so she shouldn't mind if I just..." he strummed his instrument again. The notes lingered in the air, almost palpable. "Play...Have any of you heard the ballad Falgir of Olesse? I will tell you the tale, of the man who traveled the nine skies of the Civerra, the man who battled giants, the man who gave his life for the merits of his love and his music...he grasped the starry sky in his palm..." Leir's eyes closed, all words sinking into insignificance as music flooded the room.

favourite books

The Queen's Thief series by Meghan Whalen Turner
The Bartimaeus Trilogy by Jonathan Stroud
Jonathan Strange and Mr. Norrell by Susanna Clarke
Crown Duel and Court Duel by Sherwood Smith
Mistborn by Brandon Sanderson (as well as his Alcatraz books)
The Alchemist series by Michael Scott
The Horatio Hornblower series by C.S. Forester

my websites

http://outcastsofalyvion.wordpress.com/    

HarperCollins is not responsible for the content of external internet sites.

Self-publish with CreateSpace

my books

Faeyn

 

rank 584

Faeyn

Vsuvi

The elven prince Kaslim quietly rescues an injured human boy, setting off a chain of events that could mean the destruction of the entire kingdom.


As a second son, the elven prince Kaslim has never had the slightest ambition to do anything. Elven society in general has degenerated from what it once was; appearance is valued above all things, façade triumphing over the deep connections that link elves to nature. Those connections are largely ignored, now.

Kaslim's consuming unproductivity is disastrously interrupted when he rescues a small human boy from the spite of his fellow courtiers. It was meant to be a small, quiet rescue, and it was - until the boy's sister showed up looking for him, and Kaslim's older brother took the opportunity to satisfy his own not unsubstantial ambition...

 

my friends

Robert Eetheart
Robert Eetheart
last online 2 hours ago
djinnia
djinnia
last online 38 days ago
Carmen Glade
Carmen Glade
last online 64 days ago

leave me a message

click here to leave a message

latest

T J Pallett wrote 98 days ago

Hi Vsuvi Trying to find readers and commentators for my novel Cons....

Robert Eetheart wrote 126 days ago

Hi Vsuvi! :) Thanks a lot for your comment. I'm just pleased and hap....

ndayery wrote 197 days ago

(rafica_4ndaye@yahoo.com) My name is rafica i saw your profile toda....

ndaye wrote 230 days ago

(rafica_4ndaye@yahoo.com) My name is rafica i saw your profile toda....

Eponymous Rox wrote 255 days ago

Hullo again, Vsuvi. My book's on the Ed's Desk this month and, becaus....

view all

my comments

latest

I wrote 126 days ago

Robert! I'm very very sorry I didn't review this a long time ago. I just read the first two chapters. Good job on worldbuilding - it is very clear in the writing that you have a pretty firm grasp of Jaaras (I like the name, by the way), Rivendale, etc. I have only read two chapters, so I can't rea... view book

I wrote 535 days ago

This has beautiful, lingering imagery, and subtle humor (I especially liked "but madness is not permitted here and I certainly did not consent to being so..."). The effort put into this is clear, and it definitely pays off. In terms of critiquing, I would agree with all that Karen Carr has written... view book

I wrote 549 days ago

Chapters 14 and 15: I really enjoy your first person voice. It's natural and likable enough for you to be able to get away with giving the the details you need to make a very real, flavored story. I'm mostly a fantasy reader so I won't presume to try and critique much of anything besides grammar, e... view book

I wrote 551 days ago

Aargh! Stupid comments! I never even look at them anyway! view book

I wrote 571 days ago

I regret to say I've never read Midsummer Night's Dream - only some chunks of it. :D Though I have been told before that it's like it. I suppose I've drawn from works that are influenced by Midsummer Night's dream, or something... view book

view all