This is just excellent. I mean, it is unspeakably excellent. I would buy this book in a heartbeat, no matter the price. On my shelf, for sure. Best of luck. view book

Sorry about the wait for a return read! Anyway, this is really well written. The mood is palpable, and the prose strong. I'm not usually a huge fan of this genre exactly, but I think you did well. Jessica view book

When it comes to rhyming poetry, I think your best bet is to keep with a meter (iambic pentameter, trochaic tetrameter, whatever you want). For example, in your last stanza, even if you don't balance the stressed and unstressed syllables, I would suggest keeping the number of them consistent through... view book

So good! Thanks for the read swap request. I'm so glad that I clicked on your book. I found the first chapter to be very entertaining, with just the right amount of back story and suspense. On my shelf! Jessica The Monster at the Window view book

Um, wow. So I'm going to late to work if I read any more, so I'm going to have to tear myself away, but, geez this is gripping. The present tense can be tricky, but it definitely had my adenaline going. My heartrate even sped up a little as I read. Such a fascinating premise. I'll be back for more l... view book