I'll be the first to admit, this isn't my favorite genre (your other book you've posted sounds right up my alley, though). However I found the first chapter engaging enough to immediately continue on to chapter 2. It's a very smooth read so far, the prose flows quite nicely. Not sure when I'll ha... view book

I'm glad to see someone recognize the Army of Darkness opening. I'm pretty sure you're the first. That's probably the only real similarity to Army of Darkness, though. But the main character, Victor, does occassionally see the world through pop culture colored lens. view book

I've now read through chapter 3 and just wanted a make a few quick comments while they are fresh in my mind. Chapter 2 felt a bit rushed, I guess. Mostly I found Maddy's conversation with her parents a bit jarring. Probably because it was so casual. Not really a big problem for me, however. Jus... view book

Thanks for taking the time, Ashley! view book

I appreciate the comments. As for why the big space at the very beginning there...well it makes more since on an actual printed page, where it takes up the whole page for that one statement. I didn't even think to edit it for this site, as I didn't realize how it would appear here. I'll loo... view book