The first sentence was a fantastic hook. I intended to read a chapter or two to get a feel of your writing, but I ended up reading it all. It has an interesting plot, and it moves well. It reminds me of a John Grisham-type genre, like maybe "The Firm". I think it will be commercially successful, as ... view book

I like the demon-as-drug-dealer metaphor. I don't personally care for all that fucking swearing in the dialogue; distracts me. it may have much commercial appeal. view book

Thank you for sharing this story with us. I read every word. Please keep writing. view book

I have read through chapter 26 and now have to go get my own work done, but I've read far enough to know I want to finish it. The book drew me in with its idea of valuable things becoming common, and the possibilities of this idea. This book needs to be published. Great writing. view book

OK, this needs to be published. I read voraciously, and I do love murder mysteries, so I know a good one when I see it. Great plot, great characters, wonderful writing. It's obvious you have worked very hard. I hope this book gets published. I'm backing it. view book