Your beginning is a bit risky. When you start a piece of fiction with something like weather or a person waking up, it's going to turn some people off. I don't believe in firm rules when it comes to writing, but plenty of people do. It'll give those people an excuse to dismiss your writing before it... view book

I read the first few chapters of this and liked it enough to go ahead and buy it on Kindle. I look forward to reading the rest. I'll find some room on my shelf for it in January. Nice work. view book

Though you just messaged me the other day, I'd already taken a few looks at your book since it appeared on the site. I kept coming back because there's something there and people whose opinions I respect like it, but I just haven't been able to get into it, unfortunately. With the jumping around at ... view book

First, let me say that I think the cover for this is amazing. I'd definitely put it in the top five of covers on Authonomy. It's gorgeous and fits the book well, I think. As for the book itself, I love it. The beginning is great. The rich descriptions and slow pacing are perfect for your setting.... view book

Your first chapter is exactly what a first chapter should be. The beginning is attention-grabbing, we're told just enough about the situation and the MC to get us really interested, and by the end it evokes emotion. Thankfully the rest that you've uploaded is just as good. If anyone can get to the e... view book