Hi Peter, I've begun reading your "Memory of Blood" and find your writing immediately engaging. Your writing is practiced and your story-telling is descriptive and filled with action. These are good, vibrant qualities. Overall, I think the story is good but I have a peeve. You seem to have a h... view book

The Writer's Remorse immediately grips readers with atmospheric flourish and encourages continued reading. But, you're writing skills need polish. I believe, if you can firm them up, you'll have a wonderful story. Below are my suggestions. I've made broad suggestions to other writers, but your manus... view book

Hi Danielle, Your dialogue is good, but your prose runs into some rough spots. You're being too wordy. For example - "...the man who had answered the door, as he glanced at the photograph." Consider the rewrite, "...the man who had answered the door, glancing at the photograph. - and - ... view book

Hi Mark, I'm here at Authonomy strictly to improve my skills as a writer (reviewing other authors contributes immensely), so I'm not terribly interested in pursuing revelation. I've been at the point where I believed my story and message was great and its grammar and architecture wasn't important... view book

Hi Malika, Your "agent of record" invited me to read your manuscript. As I stated in my reply, I am critical and hope fellow writers will construe my input as positive. For me, Authonomy is about gathering feedback. That said, "The Truth About Sister Henry" begins well, and there is always room f... view book