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Duncan: Where do you two come from?

Doctor: From? Well, I suppose the best way to find out where you come from is to find out where you are going and then work backwards.

Duncan: Where are you going?

Doctor: I don't know.

- Douglas Adams, Doctor Who S17E02: City of Death

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The Pazuzu Trilogy
Gaunt Rainbow

Horrid Tales of Wister Town (short story collection)
A Codex of Malevolence (short story collection)

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I wrote 420 days ago

Hi Peter, I've begun reading your "Memory of Blood" and find your writing immediately engaging. Your writing is practiced and your story-telling is descriptive and filled with action. These are good, vibrant qualities. Overall, I think the story is good but I have a peeve. You seem to have a h... view book

I wrote 472 days ago

The Writer's Remorse immediately grips readers with atmospheric flourish and encourages continued reading. But, you're writing skills need polish. I believe, if you can firm them up, you'll have a wonderful story. Below are my suggestions. I've made broad suggestions to other writers, but your manus... view book

I wrote 473 days ago

Hi Danielle, Your dialogue is good, but your prose runs into some rough spots. You're being too wordy. For example - "...the man who had answered the door, as he glanced at the photograph." Consider the rewrite, "...the man who had answered the door, glancing at the photograph. - and - ... view book

I wrote 475 days ago

Hi Mark, I'm here at Authonomy strictly to improve my skills as a writer (reviewing other authors contributes immensely), so I'm not terribly interested in pursuing revelation. I've been at the point where I believed my story and message was great and its grammar and architecture wasn't important... view book

I wrote 476 days ago

Hi Malika, Your "agent of record" invited me to read your manuscript. As I stated in my reply, I am critical and hope fellow writers will construe my input as positive. For me, Authonomy is about gathering feedback. That said, "The Truth About Sister Henry" begins well, and there is always room f... view book

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