There are a lot of books like yours on authonomy, the cynical middle aged character reflecting on their life in a somewhat amusing fashion and all of them are incredibly well written. This is certainly no exception. Witty and quick, you have clearly mastered getting the right voice. However, occasi... view book

This is incredibily well writen and very amusing. I usually only read the first chapter of books on here or a bit more if it's a short chapter but this time I've read 3. There is a certain dark homour in the cynisism and the character of Brian is really quite realistic. I will add this to my booksh... view book

I've started to read this. I think it's very good. The writing is very clear. The premise sounds amusing yet scary- all the guys she sleeps with dying. Although I'm sure there are many imaginative ways around that hehe. Stylisticly it's also very good. You capture the personality of your characters ... view book

I liked this. The first chapter and the first half of the second chapter (that's all I've read) we're really quite amusing and sweet. I like the idea of a Taxi driver it's amusing. The way in which he judges the characters who enter the taxi is amusing, it's wrong but it's right! And I also agree wi... view book

I agree with the vast majority of comments. You clearly really enjoy description and do a great job of capturing the atmosphere and majesty of the settings in the first two chapters. However, I would recommend cutting back on this as it can sometimes gets in the way of moving the narrative forward. ... view book