Hi John Firstly, I am not sure how my notes on 'Call of the Thunderbird' escaped the transcription onto your comments page. They were made some time ago, but this is certainly not a reflection on the quality of your work - quite the opposite in fact. I have re read some chapters quickly and added ... view book

Hi Henrik This has captivated me from the opening paragraph. The death of Tranter and Jack's response, Culshaws intuition - unnoticed until much later in the book and the descriptions of pain, anger and death are intense. You have made use of every single word and made it impossible for a reader to... view book

Hi Mitch This starts so quickly, you barely have time to draw breath! You keep the pace up consistently with hard hitting drama and tension - there is no alternative but to read on. JJ is a complex character in that I wanted to hate him and love him. His initial escape from the museum is tense, wit... view book

Hi TRM I have to say I was drawn to this book by the pitch and once I started reading I had to finish (currently uploaded) I'm writing this without having made notes, so it may be a little disjointed to say the least! I really enjoyed the contrasts and descriptive style you are clearly very com... view book

This is an exceptional piece of writing that drew me in from chapter one. Your descriptive flow is quite hypnotic, from the first description of Cody's car to the sounds coming from the baby monitor, where Cody "knew what he would find and he hated it" How "the noise was cut short and that single re... view book